Guest post by Ruva C
“I walked on the beach with the sun setting behind me. My feet got swallowed up by the soft sand under them, and my hair got blown about by the wind. I took a deep breath in, to smell the fresh salty air. Aaahhhh! The fresh breeze was divine.”
How would you say the words have been put together? Do you think that may be it is very realistic, and that you could imagine yourself in that scenario?